Celia

Thunder rumbled the walls. Every drop of rain descended down the window brusquely, as if in anger. Everything around me looked odd; a little voice inside me whispered constantly, extremely slowly… “You are absolutely alone.” I had persistent shivers and terrifying thoughts. All the darkness of the room could be felt. The cold of my arms made me shake with terror.  What was happening …?  I tried to look brave, however, inside me, my tears covered most of my body. Then everything stopped, and from far away, I could feel someone observing me…

2 thoughts on “Celia

  1. Hi Celia,
    Spooky story! I really liked your use of interesting adverbs like “brusquely” . I especially liked the way you described the physical sensations associated with fear- you make the reader feel them too. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Derbyshire, UK

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